Deluge — Summary

Richard GrahnContemplative

On the therapist's couch, I wonder aloud what it would be like to bundle all the pain I’ve ever experienced together with any future pains, to feel them all at once and be done with it. I mean everything, from the hangnails, slivers, cuts, and bruises, to the pain of lost relationships and death. I think how overwhelming it would be, how completely unbearable. Still, if getting it all over in one great rush was possible, would it be worth it or would it kill me?

a river overflows its banks... silence

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On a therapist’s couch, the speaker imagines packing every pain—past and future, small and devastating—into one unbearable moment. Hangnails, slivers, lost relationships, death: all of it arriving together. The question becomes whether that overwhelming rush would finally free them or simply destroy them.

The closing three lines shift from thought to image. A river overflows its banks, and then there is silence. That flood mirrors the speaker’s fantasy of total pain, while the silence carries both relief and dread. The mood is introspective and tense, caught between wanting an end to suffering and fearing what total release might cost.

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