Thirty — Summary

Risa BearDreamy

Once we had made up our minds that you should leave at morning —

we each in our way prayed dawn should never come.

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Set on the night before a painful goodbye, these six short lines capture a split between decision and desire. A group of people—perhaps family or close friends—has agreed that “you” must leave at morning. The choice seems settled, even necessary. But after making up their minds, they each privately pray that dawn will never arrive. That word “each” carries weight: everyone is alone with the same wish. The speaker’s voice is quiet and reluctant, not angry or dramatic. No one argues against the plan; they simply hope, against time, that the moment of separation will not come. The spare lines and brief pauses create a hushed, suspended mood, like a long, sorrowful night. It feels tender and full of quiet dread, holding that final darkness before loss.

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