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Risa BearContemplative

I walk along the ridge crest with nothing in my hands.

Where are you now? and how is it I am alive here — as snow begins to fall?

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The speaker is walking high along a ridge with nothing in their hands, and that small detail suggests both freedom and vulnerability. They speak to someone who is not there: “Where are you now?” The next question—“how is it I am alive here”—turns the moment toward grief or stunned survival. Snow beginning to fall makes the scene quieter and more exposed, as if the speaker is noticing the world go on while carrying an absence. The mood is hushed, solitary, and a little disbelieving. Rather than explaining a loss, the poem opens a small moment: a person alone on high ground, asking unanswerable questions as the first snow arrives. It feels like a held breath, half mourning and half wonder.

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