Eight — Summary

Risa BearContemplative

I lived two years in mountain mist. No one came to visit the abandoned quarry.

I fished every day, and short summer's sun seemed brighter than ever it did in town.

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Risa Bear’s “Eight” describes two years spent alone in mountain country, near an abandoned quarry where no one came to visit. The speaker fished every day, and the short summer sun felt brighter than it ever had in town. The lines are plain and unhurried, which gives the memory a calm, inward quality. The solitude does not feel painful; it feels chosen, even treasured. The abandoned quarry suggests a world left behind, while the daily fishing becomes a small ritual of self-sufficiency. By setting the mountains against the town, the poem implies that life in the mist offered a sharper kind of clarity—light more vivid, time slower, needs reduced to simple things. The mood is hushed, reflective, and quietly protective of that stretch of time. It reads like a small bright fragment of memory, carefully preserved.

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