Revelation — Poem analysis

Robert FrostContemplative

We make ourselves a place apart Behind light words that tease and flout, But oh, the agitated heart Till someone find us really out.

’Tis pity if the case require (Or so we say) that in the end We speak the literal to inspire The understanding of a friend.

But so with all, from babes that play At hide-and-seek to God afar, So all who hide too well away Must speak and tell us where they are.

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Everyone knows the moment in hide-and-seek when you have hidden so well that nobody comes, and the game stops being fun. Robert Frost's twelve-line "Revelation" starts from that small, sulky disappointment and stretches it into a claim about friendship, human nature and even God. Its central idea is a paradox: we build defences out of jokes and irony, yet what we want is for someone to see through them.

The first stanza sets up the hiding place. "We make ourselves a place apart / Behind light words that tease and flout." The place is left vague, which suits something built out of attitude rather than bricks. The wall is made of speech. "Light" suggests both weightless and not serious, while "flout" means to treat with open scorn, so the cheerfulness has an edge. It is a way of keeping people at a distance. Then the tone breaks: "But oh, the agitated heart." The interjection is the first unguarded sound in the poem, and it shows what the cleverness costs. The stanza ends on a wish dressed as a condition: "Till someone find us really out." "Found out" usually means caught and exposed, but here exposure is what the heart longs for. The word "really" separates the self behind the wall from the one performing in front of it.

The second stanza turns shy and a little sarcastic. "'Tis pity" is old-fashioned, a mock sigh, and the parenthesis "(Or so we say)" works like a raised eyebrow. We claim that it is a shame to have to speak plainly, but the speaker doubts whether we really think so. Plain speech is "the literal," the dull opposite of the "light words" of the first stanza, and it is the only thing that can "inspire / The understanding of a friend." Wit can keep people out but cannot let them in.

The third stanza widens the scope sharply, from "babes that play / At hide-and-seek to God afar." The pronouns shift too. In the first two stanzas "we" are the hiders. At the end "us" are the seekers, waiting for others to come out: "So all who hide too well away / Must speak and tell us where they are." Hiding too well is treated as a mistake, a game that has gone wrong. Putting God at the far end of the scale is bold. Judging by the logic of the stanza, divine silence is just another kind of hiding, and the "must" applies to Him as much as to a child behind a sofa. The title's meaning stretches accordingly, from a personal confession to the religious sense of a revealed truth.

The form keeps all this casual. The poem is in iambic tetrameter, four beats a line, close to ordinary speech, and the rhyme scheme is a plain ABAB in each quatrain. Some of the rhymes carry meaning. "Heart" rhymes with "apart," so the heart is what sits in the hiding place. "Flout" rhymes with "out," linking defiance and exposure. "End" rhymes with "friend," as if the friend were where the whole process finally arrives. "Are" closes the poem on a bare verb of being.

That last line, "Must speak and tell us where they are," is made entirely of one-syllable words and contains no figure of speech. In other words, the poem ends by speaking the literal, doing what it says hiders must do. Up to that point it has been teasing and playful, with a nursery game, a wry parenthesis and a bouncing rhythm. A reader may reasonably wonder whether the poem is itself a little "light words," a hiding place, until the final line steps out into the open.

That mix is what makes it worth reading. It sounds like a shrug but lands like a confession. In twelve lines it recognises something many people feel and rarely say: the cleverness we use to protect ourselves is often a way of asking to be noticed.

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