«Eyes closed breathing deeply…» — Summary

Eyes closed breathing deeply This is it i tell myself I open my mouth to speak These are the words that come out Hand in hand we walk together The stars light the night Imagine us together again Eating under the big oak tree Laughing at my not so funny jokes Remember the time we stole your moms keys And took a ride to the park Just so we could get on the swings Or the time i lost my favorite t-shirt You bought me a new one so i would have to When you broke up with your girlfriend I was there to comfort you I wad at your first football game Your track meet too Don't forget the times we had together The good and the bad I love You I promise I wont Forget you I walk around the podium and lay the flowers on your grave Seeing you one last set my heart free

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The poem begins with a speaker steadying themselves, eyes closed, ready to say something difficult. What follows reads like a eulogy, spoken to a close friend who has died. The memories are small and warm: stealing a mom's keys to ride swings at the park, a replaced t-shirt, comfort after a breakup, cheering at football games and track meets. Laughter runs through them, even the speaker's "not so funny jokes."

The poem's turn comes near the end. After all the shared memories, the speaker promises never to forget the friend, then walks to the podium and lays flowers on the grave. Only then do we fully see that the earlier scenes were remembered, not happening now.

The mood is tender and sorrowful, but also settled. The plain, simple language makes the grief feel honest rather than dramatic. The final line suggests that seeing the friend one last time brings a kind of release, as if saying goodbye lets the speaker's heart go free.

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