Heat Wave — Summary

On the boardwalk old men take off their hats & dream of the city, once theirs, calling the sea in. The wind pushes into the sweat of a woman a yard wide at the hips, into the smells of hotdogs & warm beer & across sand a pale spider makes false rushes at a string trailed from the fingers of a kid who is watching a girl's thighs open as softly as a clam mined by the sun. Squalls crack light below the horizon but the heat holds. The old men, forgetting the city that broke them out of it long ago, sleep by the sea, dreamless.

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On a sweltering day at the seaside, the poem moves its eye along a boardwalk, picking out small, unglamorous details: old men without their hats, a heavy woman sweating in the wind, the smell of hotdogs and warm beer. The old men dream of a city that was once theirs, but by the end they have forgotten even that. The city, we're told, "broke them out of it," so their memory seems to hold loss as much as pride. They end up asleep and "dreamless."

The speaker mostly observes rather than comments, which gives the scene a flat, drowsy feel. Still, a few images stand out. A kid fiddles with a toy on a string while watching a girl's thighs "open as softly / as a clam mined by the sun," a line that is sensual and slightly uneasy. Youth is awake with desire; age has gone quiet. Storms flicker offshore, but the heat doesn't break. The mood is sticky, lazy, and a little melancholy, as if time has stalled.

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