Song of the Penny Arcade — Poem analysis

Carl SolomonCheerful

Here the imagination is really freed. The two fighters swing their iron arms. Right on the button and one goes down. The hockey players swing their sticks, The puck goes flying. The fortune teller's verdict comes through the slot. The ski balls bounce here, there, then land. There is nothing like this place in the whole world.

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Solomon opens with a boast that sounds like a sign painted over an arcade door: "Here the imagination is really freed." The word "really" gives it away. It is the plain, slightly breathless language of someone talking, not a poet building a grand claim. It also sets up the question the rest of the poem quietly asks: what kind of freedom is this? Everything that follows is evidence, and the evidence is made of iron, sticks, pucks and slots.

The poem is a short tour of the machines. Two fighters trade blows ("Right on the button and one goes down"), hockey players swing, a fortune teller hands out a verdict, ski balls bounce. Notice who is missing. No player, no child, no coin-dropping hand appears anywhere. The fighters "swing their iron arms" on their own, the puck "goes flying," the verdict "comes through the slot." With the people erased, the machines seem to come alive, as if the arcade were a theatre running by itself. That may be what "imagination" means here. The speaker looks at mechanical figures and sees real boxers and real athletes, and the poem gives them the grammar of real action: present tense, active verbs, a knockout that "goes down" like the real thing. "Button," incidentally, is boxing slang for the point of the chin, so the line works as both a clean hit and a pun on the game's controls.

Yet the freedom is oddly controlled. Each machine does one thing, over and over. "Swing" appears in line two and again in line four, and the repetition feels like the machinery itself, the same motion looping. The word "verdict" is the most revealing choice. A verdict is a final judgment handed down by a court, and here it drops out of a slot like a ticket. The one thing in the arcade that should belong to mystery, a glimpse of the future, has become a coin-and-slot transaction. The poem never says whether this is sad or delightful, and that ambiguity is much of its charm. The statement "imagination is really freed" can be read as wonder or as dry irony, and the poem declines to choose.

The form supports this. There is no rhyme and no regular meter. The lines are short, and nearly every one is a complete sentence closed by a full stop, so the poem plays like a row of snapshots, one cabinet per line, as if the speaker were walking past them. Small touches vary the pace. In lines four and five the sentence breaks after "sticks," and "The puck goes flying" arrives on a new line, so the line break acts like the hit itself. The hard consonants of "Right on the button," "puck" and "sticks" click and clack like arcade noise. Then comes "The ski balls bounce here, there, then land." The commas make the line bounce, and "here, there" scatters the word the poem began with, "Here," before the line settles on the soft thud of "land."

The final line, "There is nothing like this place in the whole world," is the longest and flattest in the poem. It has no imagery, only a claim, and it sounds like something a child says on the way out the door. It answers the opening ("Here" at the start, "There is" at the end) and frames the poem as one long, unguarded exclamation. After seven lines of showing, the speaker simply stops describing and declares.

What makes the poem worth reading is its nerve. The title calls it a "song," a word we expect to find attached to praise, and the subject is a cheap, loud, commercial room where a penny buys a few seconds of play. Solomon does not decorate it or apologise for it. He trusts the plain facts of the place: iron arms, a flying puck, a bouncing ball. In doing so he suggests that imagination is not reserved for forests and skies. It can wake up in front of a coin slot, even if the freedom it finds there arrives, strangely, on schedule.

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