«Wholly absorbed…» — Summary

Charles OlsonContemplative

Wholly absorbed into my own conduits to an inner nature or subterranean lake the depths or bounds of which I more and more explore and know more of, in that sense that other than that all else closes out and I tend further to fall into the Beloved Lake and I am blinder from

spending time as insistently in and on this personal preserve from which what I do do emerges more well-known than other ways and other outside places which don't give as much and distract me from

keeping my attentions as clear

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The speaker describes turning inward, away from the world, toward a private place he pictures as an underground lake. He calls it "the Beloved Lake," and the more time he spends there, the more he explores it and the more he knows it. Everything else seems to fade. He admits a cost, too: he is "blinder" from spending so much time there, as if staring into the dark has dulled his sight for anything outside.

The mood is absorbed, quiet, and a little uneasy. He says his work comes out of this "personal preserve" and is better known to him than other ways of working, while outside places give less and only distract. Yet the poem seems to undercut its own confidence. The syntax stumbles and loops, and the last line, "keeping my attentions as clear," simply stops, unfinished. Judging by that ending, the focus he wants may be slipping even as he tries to describe it.

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