«If there were another world: orange skies and…» — Summary

If there were another world: orange skies and purple flowers; tall languorous women waiting behind the bouganvillias, each with her own dark voice to send those low calls toward the night; and huge birds, bigger than ponies. soaring through the crimson skies; with bloodstone plumage and shadowy wings making windstorms as they passed.

and a soft succulent silence, and the low drifting calls of tall women, waiting behind the lattices; and piles of oranges in the streetstalls, piled higher than the houses, mangoes, melons, pineapples: all the sweet clear acid orange; and coconuts, and rich dark beer; canaries, mockingbirds and parrots jangling in the patio; caged flash of crimson or dark green; the jangling cries; and several suns setting all at once; violet ones and pale green; and then the honeysuckle dusk and women waiting, face in hand, behind the opened doors.

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The poem is one long "if": the speaker imagines another world, and the whole thing is built from wishful pictures. The sky is orange or crimson, the flowers are purple, and enormous birds with dark, bloodstone-coloured feathers sweep overhead. Down on the street, fruit is piled higher than the houses, and caged parrots and mockingbirds fill the patio with noise. Even the sunsets are excessive, with several suns going down at once in violet and pale green.

The figures who return again and again are the tall women, waiting behind bougainvillias, lattices and open doors. Their low calls drift through the night, and the poem never says who they are calling to. That leaves a mood of longing, sensual and a little drowsy. Everything is ripe, bright and heavy with scent, yet there is also a hush, as if the world is holding its breath. The speaker seems less interested in reaching this place than in lingering in it, and the poem ends without any arrival, only more waiting.

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