Abstraction on His Father — Summary

Hugh SeidmanContemplative

The fire doors open out going down hinged at the left to the outside frame. In the intricacy of the stacks, tier on tier, turning always right it was possible for a man to remain unnoticed. incurved the frame's vault the door's metal the hand opens in the gesture of closing There is the instance of the fire door locked to rescind the forces of heat slammed full to the cores of memory & the artless rest to him who desires.

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The poem starts with a cold, almost technical description of fire doors, how they hinge and which way they open. Then it moves into a maze of library-like stacks, where "tier on tier" and constant right turns make it easy for a man to go unnoticed. The title suggests that man is the speaker's father, though the poem never says so directly. That distance is part of the point: the father is seen only through structures, metal, and frames.

The feeling is guarded and tense. The speaker avoids saying anything tender or direct and talks about doors instead. The image of a hand opening "in the gesture of closing" captures a mix of reaching out and shutting down. The locked fire door, slammed "to the cores of memory," seems to stand for memory sealed against heat or pain. The mood is cool, enclosed, and a little haunted, as if the speaker is circling something too painful to approach head-on.

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