«Eileen walks slow…» — Summary

Eileen walks slow in an empty place breathe around her, the world is off to four directions, and I wait and I listen for her to come by branches in forest where I'm hidden.

who she is, who ever she will be I wait in the corner of her eyes. rabbit cross shadow line in field frostcover, marmot under the stone coon begging in Yosemite Valley chipmunk poke from behind rock, summit of Goddard:

she waits, whoever she will be, when the world is changed and we all dance with these beings in every direction.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The speaker is hidden in a forest, waiting and listening for a girl named Eileen, who walks slowly through an empty place. He doesn't step forward. He stays "in the corner of her eyes," present but unseen, more watcher than companion. The poem is as interested in who Eileen will become as in who she is now.

Midway through, the speaker fills the page with small animals: a rabbit crossing a frosty field, a marmot under a stone, a raccoon begging in Yosemite Valley, a chipmunk on the summit of Goddard. They seem to be the creatures he waits among, and perhaps he sees himself in their shyness and stillness.

The ending looks ahead to a time "when the world is changed," when Eileen and everyone else will dance with these beings in every direction. The mood is quiet and tender, a little hushed, with a hopeful, almost dreamlike wish for a world where people and animals belong together.

Read also

More by John Oliver Simon

All poems