6.8 — Summary

6.8 And if to die is to move from the ugliness of this world then let it be; should I welcome spring; turn summer down, and fall from my hands; the serpent's slow unwinding, agate eyes, and blue bushes now in flower; spice smells undo the lament of tree leaves on the cement. But if this cannot be then let it die with the singing of one lone bird, at twilight crook the hand, crawl over, cover us with leaves.

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The speaker begins with a quiet "if": if dying means leaving behind the ugliness of the world, then so be it. But the thought isn't bleak in a simple way. Right away the poem fills with the things that would be lost or given up: spring, summer, the slow-moving serpent with its agate eyes, blue bushes in flower, the smell of spice. Even the "lament / of tree leaves on the cement" suggests that the world's beauty and its sadness are tangled together.

Then the speaker offers a second possibility: if death can't be a clean escape, let it come softly, with one lone bird singing at twilight. The final image is tender, almost like being tucked in. A hand crooks, crawls over, and covers "us" with leaves. The mood is weary but gentle, caught between disgust with the world and a deep attachment to its small, sensory details. Death here feels less like terror and more like a hoped-for rest.

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