«That the neighborhood might be covered…» — Summary

Larry EignerContemplative

That the neighborhood might be covered by one roof, occured this morning, Snow on the ground phonepoles, flagpoles, windows, so many chimneys, even up the hill grass smoking out west the tides, clouds from the past vanishing rain the base. beaten out, death when you don't want it what you like is a plain object the long-trunked clouds a weltered event shale fish broken off a spiderweb hitched the dictionary overnight, I left it out there, screens in summer to keep the flies out into the dark sea the open garage doors under the vine which in autumn looks as if it still might hold somebody's backs, encroached saw, horses angling out you want the hills to rise twigs levelled on against the sky After 3 days the air empty from the rain

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The poem begins with a simple, odd thought: after snowfall, the whole neighborhood might sit under one roof. From there it moves the way attention does when you stare out a window. Phone poles, flagpoles, chimneys, a hill, smoke-like grass, clouds, a spiderweb, open garage doors, a vine, twigs against the sky. Nothing is explained, and the lines jump from one sight to the next, sometimes mid-thought.

That broken, patchy quality is the point. The speaker seems to be taking in the world piece by piece, letting seasons and memories blur together, with summer screens and autumn vines slipping in among the snow. A few lines turn darker, like "death when you don't want it," but they pass quickly and aren't pursued.

The mood is quiet, alert, and a little lonely. Judging by the imagery, the speaker is mostly watching rather than acting, and the ending, "the air / empty from the rain," leaves a feeling of stillness and space.

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