«(as you go into Seir or Ives)…» — Summary

(as you go into Seir or Ives)

once worlds were small as battleships or nine dozen ballfields enough to be perfect

but a number of things now go wrong mysterious expectation with the worlds merged no god-like power that we can conceive

we see in front ahead and why not be there

while math is quite the bag of a half nonillion tricks

so Goya went mad in the end something like Swift how things pass go on

one colored eye one black and white history's a map no time

there are black places nothing stopped...

dead forgotten flags

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The poem moves from a world that once felt manageable to one that feels too big, too tangled, and slightly out of reach. At first, worlds were "small as battleships" or a few ballfields, "enough to be perfect." Now things "go wrong," and the speaker senses a vague, unsettled expectation, with no "god-like power" to make sense of it all. Even math, which might promise order, is described casually as a bag of tricks.

The mention of Goya going mad and of Swift suggests the speaker is thinking about how minds and lives wear down over time. History becomes "a map" with "no time," and the poem ends in "black places" and "dead forgotten flags." The mood is quiet, uneasy, and a little sad. Eigner's broken, clipped lines mimic a mind drifting from thought to thought, so the poem feels less like an argument and more like watching someone think about loss and the way everything passes.

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