Dream Substance Dissolved — Summary

Lloyd Addison1970Cheerful

lie head eye closed see down dark lanes of wish running light ever away ---

in the clothes of dark shades some income- subtracted rainbow appeal to reason where wear is

black odds exposed to red herring soup black chips fortune's coup black blues union of back dues -- the oils of life rust out the coils of spring must sprout.

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The poem starts with someone lying down, eyes closed, watching wishes run off into the dark like light that never stops moving away. Dreams are there, but they stay out of reach. Then the focus shifts to the waking world. "Dark shades" and an "income-subtracted rainbow" suggest that hope has been cut down by money trouble, so even beauty has to be paid for.

The last section piles up gambling and hardship imagery: "black odds," "black chips," "black blues," and "back dues." Judging by the wordplay, the speaker sees luck and fairness as rigged, and the repeated word "black" may point to race as well as bad fortune, though the poem never says so directly. The mood is weary and bitter, with a bit of wry humor in the rhymes. Still, it ends on a turn: the "oils of life rust out," but the "coils of spring must sprout." Something stubborn and hopeful pushes back against the decay.

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O bury me not in:in the little room, like a worm in a one-by-one padded & colorful, far from the madding birds --- O bury me not in long unrequited dreams O bury me not in the margins of identity, voiceless & meaningless