The Wait — Summary

Lloyd Addison'58Romantic

wait for the girl lately loved with whom fate has hungered

waiting

hastens

fate

for the or alternative awaits the ing T H I N G the weights of wait the love of God more surely assured

waiting to close when in thewonder inside feeling thunders follows white like lightning lithe as rain as night roughly lonesome

litigation takes long and the gates of matters early/late

but two have come too late

perhaps (heart) time out and out doubles outer day breaks somewhere at doubt-turning reason day in night brightens out-extending distance into open outer continuance when resolve is rocked and templed time is a space without entrance an island in transit away

from lonesome sky space

lonesome love has come to visit time-out-waited-out to here

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Lloyd Addison's "The Wait" is about waiting for love and what waiting does to a person. The speaker begins by telling us to wait for a girl who has been "lately loved," someone fate seems to want as badly as the speaker does. Then the poem plays with the word itself: waiting "hastens" fate, a neat contradiction, and "wait" echoes against "weights," as if patience were a heavy load.

The language gets tangled and fragmented in the middle, which suits the speaker's unsettled feelings. Images of thunder, lightning, rain and night suggest a sudden, overwhelming emotion that is also lonely. The line "but two have come too late" hints at a missed chance, though the poem doesn't say exactly why.

By the end, time feels like "a space without entrance," an island drifting away. Yet the last lines turn quietly hopeful: "lonesome love has come to visit." The mood is yearning and reflective, with loneliness slowly giving way to arrival.

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