«wall of remote…» — Summary

Neil MyersContemplative

wall of remote heights & bends of listless fields

turn savagely to the river where the trees

snap in the snow a bird watches the frozen mice

deer i am sick of talking about

vietnam these bridges: stringent iron

under which the prints of huge birds that flew off in september following

the riverchain to return as blackbirds

stunning the trees incredible demons voyages i am your mind frozen but the smallest

bloom may rouse

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The poem begins with a cold, bleak winter scene: distant heights, listless fields, a river, trees snapping in the snow, a bird watching frozen mice. Nothing here is comforting. Then the speaker breaks in with a blunt, weary line: "i am sick / of talking about / vietnam." The war seems to hang over the quiet landscape, and the speaker can't shake it, even while looking at bridges and snow.

The imagery that follows is strange and dreamlike. Huge birds leave their prints, fly away in September, and return as blackbirds, which the speaker calls "incredible demons." These images suggest something dark coming back, perhaps memories or fears. The speaker then addresses them directly: "i am your mind / frozen." The mood is numb, tired and uneasy. Yet the final lines offer a thin hope: even a frozen mind might be woken by "the smallest / bloom." The poem ends quietly, with possibility rather than certainty.

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