Translations — Summary

Steve BensonCheerful

it's when reading them, I just have to imagine the excited writing of the one author and its openness (streams, thickets, wrestling dogs) - that's reading - there is no right translation, just absurd efforts to make it the same in main respects - oh noble boring iconoclast! get to the country, open mouthed, chew on miles of hay! don't you know as long as you're among these people of cities you'll smoke and burn coffee? the air is cold! we hate radio. turn it off and march outside at your leisure, sooner or later you'll break that guilt, look at rooks and starlings, stop trying to crease the grass so much in your fingers, they are not machines! just eat, open your mouth, eat! my throat is in my heart, or vice versa, listening to these fast sounds burbling thickly through my morn - it feels ticklish, crybabyish, I am somehow crippled and the blood isn't running regularly -

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The poem begins with translation but quickly becomes about something bigger: the gap between lived experience and the way we process it. The speaker says there is no "right" translation, only clumsy attempts to make a text match its original. Then the voice shifts and starts lecturing a "noble boring iconoclast," urging this person to leave the city, ditch the radio and coffee, and simply eat, breathe and look at birds. The tone is bossy but also playful, even pleading.

The speaker may really be talking to themselves. The ending suggests this: the throat and heart blur together, the sounds feel "ticklish, crybabyish," and the blood "isn't running regularly." Judging by this, the speaker feels overwhelmed and a little broken, stuck in a head full of words while longing for something physical and direct. The mood is restless, tender and slightly comic, with an anxious edge underneath.

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