Translations 1A — Summary

Steve BensonCheerful

When I read them I'm obliged to project myself the original author's thrill writing and the expanse: trees, sky, tremendous dogs fighting: for me this is to read. There exists no best translation, however one admires the vain effort none makes to make it all the same, somehow authentic if not perfect (meanwhile sickening of the original!). Oh yucky repetitious pretensions of mind! move outside, out of sight! get your jaws wide! eat Mother Nature! Know the ways of the city drag. Contemplate a while cigarettes and boiling coffee. Dig cold air! Shut down contraptions (like radio) and ramble determinedly about — out! Time comes your guilt will crack, eyes see nameless birds, fingers play in grasses without attempt to bend and cut. Nothing is mechanical! All organic, and edible! Now mouths feel the heart, hearts are sensitive to lips, teeth and tongues, as I hear these words cascading through a difficult hour... It feels ticklish, salty in the eyes, I limp but am not limp, erratically bleeding inside.

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The poem starts with a problem: reading a translation means imagining the original writer's thrill, and the speaker admits no translation can ever be the best one. Then the mood snaps. Fed up with "repetitious pretensions of mind," the speaker begins shouting orders at himself and us: go outside, open your jaws, eat Mother Nature, drink in cold air, switch off the radio. The tone is bossy, funny, and a little desperate, like someone talking himself out of his own head.

As the poem moves, the commands soften into something more physical. Eyes see nameless birds, fingers play in grass, and mouths, hearts, lips and tongues blur together. Reading becomes a bodily experience rather than a mental one. The ending turns quieter and more vulnerable. The speaker feels ticklish, teary, and limping yet "not limp," bleeding inside. The mood is restless and exhilarated, but with a real ache underneath that the loud energy can't quite hide.

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