If Tsunami Came Rising — Summary

As an old man I met a young girl who loved the ocean more.

She spoke in rapture, longed for danger, and let waves wash away her heart, exposed; winter storm along the desolate shore.

Once captured by sea, she could not shake its spell. Her fever burned, contagious down her back, seaweed green and glistening in the long night rain.

I fell in love with her devotion, gasping for breath along the coast. Cold waters, Pacific Northwest, blue numb skin, struggling against crushing waves…

Until she washed ashore beneath soft sand and beach fire, tucked under night stars, her soul strung about, uprooted limbs in the mist.

And I was inspired, hopeful if tsunami came rising, desperate and seeking higher ground, I would run straight for it, arms outstretched, howling into the wind…

Like that young girl, who loved the ocean more.

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An old man looks back on a young girl who loved the ocean more than anything, and the poem slowly shows how that love consumed her. She longs for danger and lets the waves wash over her "exposed" heart. Her devotion feels like a fever, and the speaker, who admits he fell in love with it, watches her struggle in cold, crushing water. Her end comes quietly: she washes ashore, her soul "strung about" like something scattered on the beach.

What stands out is the speaker's reaction. Instead of fearing the sea, he is inspired. If a tsunami came, he says, he would not run for higher ground but toward the wave, arms out, howling. The mood is wild and haunting, part grief and part reckless admiration. The poem seems to ask whether a life given fully to something you love, even something that destroys you, might be braver than staying safe.

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