The oldest lovestory — Summary

Celestie777Romantic

Moon is the most beautiful among all stars, except one oh! that magnificent sun She blushes and hides Whenever he rise

He lights up the whole world Searching for her But she is made to be different and lonely This is the world's oldest lovestory

Written on the skies How true love is always there And miles apart, Always behind but never beside

He brings the day and she rules the night both too comfortable there to leave it beside, twilight brings the messages to them each Because when they meet it causes an eclipse.

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Celestie777 retells the sun and moon's relationship as the world's oldest love story. The moon is shown as shy: she admires the sun, blushes, and hides whenever he rises. He, in turn, lights up the whole world as if he's searching for her. But they are made for different halves of the day, so she stays lonely and set apart, and the speaker sees this as true love that is always present yet never close, "always behind but never beside."

The speaker sounds tender and a little sad, but also accepting. The last stanza adds a twist: the two are "too comfortable" in their own realms to leave them, and twilight carries messages between them. If they ever did meet, it would cause an eclipse, so their distance seems to protect something. The mood is wistful and quietly romantic, with love presented as devotion that survives separation rather than a story about being together.

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