Star-crossed — Summary

Celestie777Romantic

He said, he got something to say He is from a million years away.. Before I can even see his face, I took the quickest way to escape.. Than he asked me my name And I took that as a threat.. We crossed and fought In the battle of thoughts He asked me why I'm always in rush I said it's my fault, I don't trust.. He said maybe he can help me, I said sorry I'm in hurry.. His eyes made my heart swell I said sorry, I just don't take kindness well.. That encounter should have been our last.. But we both lost the battle of thoughts.. He said he can't help coming back.. And I relished in the fact, That the best place to rest is on his chest..

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Celestie777's "Star-crossed" tells of a meeting between two people who seem to come from different worlds, and of a speaker who tries hard not to be reached. When the stranger says he has something to say, she runs before she has even seen his face. His simple question about her name feels like a threat, and the whole conversation turns into what she calls a "battle of thoughts."

Underneath the defensiveness, the speaker is wary of being helped. She says she doesn't trust and doesn't "take kindness well," yet his eyes make her heart swell. The short, clipped lines and the repeated "sorry" capture her rush to get away.

The mood shifts near the end. They both "lost" the battle, which here feels like a good defeat. He keeps coming back, and she finally relaxes, finding rest on his chest. The poem moves from fear and tension to quiet, hard-won comfort.

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