In dreams — Summary

I once hit my head so hard dreams leaked out they were semi-solid things gelatinous and transluscent like something from the dark reaches near the bottom of the ocean pale, icy colored reds and blues and greens I could never view them directly but only from the corner of my eye there were not many perhaps half a dozen? if I allow life to slow or backslide my dreams, they get agitated once, one of them even kicked me in the shin.

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The speaker imagines that a hard knock to the head let his dreams spill out of him, and then describes them as if they were living creatures. They are jelly-like and see-through, pale reds, blues and greens, a bit like deep-sea animals that rarely meet the light. He can only catch them from the corner of his eye, so they stay just out of clear view. There are only about half a dozen, and the speaker isn't even sure of the number, which makes the memory feel loose and dreamlike.

The tone is odd, quiet and a little funny. The speaker talks about something impossible in a flat, matter-of-fact voice. Then the poem turns: if he lets life "slow or backslide," the dreams get agitated. They seem to want him to keep moving, to chase what he cares about. The final image, a dream kicking him in the shin, is both comic and a bit of a scolding. The mood is playful, but underneath it carries a gentle worry about neglecting your own hopes.

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