View of Grand Coulee from the Hospital — Summary

Constance SchultzContemplative

trees and lines and stickmen and boulders too big to be less than

a hill heavy rock a motel {sigh}

a main street see the middle school from here and a parts store nearly

the library and a grocery store below in the midway

and a park with boulders taller than 5 men where quail live

and deer play but no dogs are allowed and they have swings

and a merry-go-round and it’s almost summer the thrift

store will have summer clothes this week and this is where the turkeys

go and they have teeter-totters and a slide and still no dogs

every place comes with a view of canyons and dams and lakes

on the bottom and rock walls making their own special rooms

protected channeled full of spirit wind they build

around boulders they climb them/you can’t eat rocks

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The speaker looks out from a hospital window and lists whatever the view offers: trees, a motel, a main street, a middle school, a parts store, a grocery, a park. The title places the speaker in the hospital, but the poem never says why, so the reason is left open. What comes through is a mind taking inventory, almost clutching at the ordinary. The sentences run on without full stops, as if one thing simply leads to the next.

The park gets the most attention: quail, deer, swings, a merry-go-round, and the repeated note that dogs aren't allowed. Small, everyday details like the thrift store's summer clothes suggest someone looking ahead to the season. Meanwhile the huge boulders and canyon walls keep pushing back in, "protected channeled full / of spirit wind." The mood is quiet, observant, and a little wistful, with the town and the land held together. The last line, "you can't eat rocks," is blunt and oddly funny, a plain-spoken way of turning from awe back to daily life.

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