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Balachandran VTrivandrum, 09-12-2010Romantic

There! I have lit a star Beside your name! I scroll down my Inbox Where stars twinkle next to you Every time, every time you wrote to me!

Every little message, every little word You wrote Is a thought – of me!

In this dark and silent night I read you, over and over And you light up, once again My room, my lonely heart!

I wish I could make a garland Of all the stars one day. I will keep it ready For the day you’ll come –

Though I know you won’t, ever...

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A lonely person sits in a dark room, scrolling through old emails from someone they love. Next to the sender's name, the speaker has marked each message with a star, and those little stars become the poem's central image. Every message is proof that the other person once thought of them, so each one glows.

The mood is tender and quiet, with a deep loneliness underneath. The speaker rereads the messages "over and over" at night, and the words seem to brighten both the room and their heart. The wish to string all the stars into a garland, ready for the day the loved one visits, is sweet and hopeful. But the last line, set apart after a pause, undoes that hope: "Though I know you won't, ever..." The ellipsis lets the sadness trail off. What remains is love that keeps going on memory alone, knowing the one it waits for will not return.

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