Gone up in Smoke — Summary

Crackling cellophane As the packet opens- Aroma of tobacco. Fingers a- trembling, brain a- tickling. The glowing butt, curling smoke As the tip touches one’s lips- Tingle! Deep intake of smoke Seeps in settling, satiating one’s blood. Rings dancing in the air Wafting away into nothingness Only a fragrance remains- Then that too, like you, is gone forever.

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Balachandran V's poem follows a single cigarette from the moment the packet is opened to the moment the last trace of smoke disappears. The opening details are sensory and close-up: the crackle of cellophane, the smell of tobacco, trembling fingers. The speaker seems to know this ritual well, and the poem lingers over it with something close to pleasure. The lighting, the first deep drag, and the smoke settling into the blood are described as a tingle of relief, as if the body has been waiting for it.

Then the mood shifts. The smoke rings dance, drift off, and vanish, leaving only a fragrance, and even that fades. The final line turns suddenly personal: the fragrance is gone "like you." That small phrase suggests someone has been lost, though the poem doesn't say who. The title, "Gone up in Smoke," carries the same double meaning. The poem moves from craving and comfort to emptiness, leaving a quiet, wistful feeling about things that burn away.

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