Definition — Poem analysis

Balachandran VTrivandrum. 28.05.2012Contemplative

To define is to confine To define is to be finite To finally shut the windows To firmly shut others out.

To define is not to look at the sky To define is to end the quest To define would be To defeat yourselves To rob yourselves of the infinity that was promised...

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Nine short lines, and almost every one begins by doing the very thing it warns against. "To define is to confine," Balachandran V writes, and the poem goes on defining definition itself, over and over, as if testing whether the act can be done without harm. The central idea is that naming and fixing something, whether a person, a belief or a goal, closes off the openness that makes it worth pursuing. The poem is signed from Trivandrum, 28 May 2012, and beyond that the words on the page are our best evidence.

The argument begins in the sound of the language. "Define," "confine," "finite" and "finally" all share the same core syllable, and that is no accident: they come from the Latin word for an end or a boundary. Even if a reader doesn't know this, the ear catches the echo, so the words feel like bricks from one wall. The first line also contains the poem's only true rhyme, "define" with "confine," and it lands with a snap, like a lock. The next stanza adds "defeat," which is not related in origin but sounds like the same family, so defining slides into defeating almost before we notice. Line three then stacks "finally" and "firmly" with the hard "shut," and line four repeats "shut." The repeated sounds and words make the closing feel heavy and deliberate.

The imagery is plain but effective. Closing "the windows" is a domestic picture of someone sealing a room against the weather, or against visitors. The poem reads it as a loss: the room may be safe, but it is airless, and "others" are left outside. Then comes the pivot to "the sky," the largest and least definable thing we can look at. A window frames a piece of sky, but a closed window frames nothing. The poem's version of a closed mind is someone who has stopped looking up. The word "quest" widens the idea from space to time. To define is "to end the quest," to declare the journey over because we have decided what the destination is.

The second stanza turns the argument inward. In the first, the damage falls on "others," who are shut out. In the second it comes back on us: "to defeat yourselves, / To rob yourselves." The shift from "is" to "would be" also changes the tone, from flat statement to warning. The plural "yourselves" makes the speaker sound like someone addressing a whole room, which gives the lines a quiet urgency. The most interesting phrase is "the infinity that was promised." The passive verb never says who made the promise, so the poem leaves it open. Judging by the wording, infinity is presented as a birthright, something we are given and then give away by settling for a definition. That word also answers "finite" from line two. Infinity is literally "not finite," so the poem ends on the opposite of the idea it began with.

The poem has no regular end rhyme and no strict meter, but it is far from loose. The lines are short and clipped, built on the repeated "To define…" and "To… shut…" patterns, which gives the opening an almost chant-like rigidity. Then the final line stretches out. It is the longest in the poem, and it trails off in an ellipsis rather than a full stop. A poem about boundaries ends by refusing to have a firm one, and the form acts out the argument.

That is also where the poem's cleverness lies. It cannot escape the paradox that every statement it makes is itself a definition, so the dots at the end read as a small admission: the thought can't be completed, and perhaps it shouldn't be. For a student reader, the significance is practical as well as literary. Labels like "good at maths," "not a poetry person" or "that kind of person" are definitions too, and the poem suggests they can shut windows we haven't yet looked through. In nine lines it makes a case for staying curious.

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