A Passing Scenery — Summary

While in a train from north to south, Past the paddy, the groves, the lagoons, Past where pearls glitter in sun, Someone I love passed me by.

In a train from south to north, Past the streams, the ponds, the lakes On the tracks west to where I sat, In that train fleeing past, My son, my uttermost love, passed me by.

In that train that flew past me, In the blur of faces that swept past me, One was my son, my uttermost love.

I, in a train running north to south, My heart in a train running south to north.

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The speaker is on a train traveling north to south when another train rushes past in the opposite direction. Inside it, among a blur of faces, is the speaker's son, someone he loves beyond all others. They are close enough to pass each other, yet neither can stop, call out, or reach across the gap. The moment is over almost before it begins.

The feeling is a quiet, aching helplessness. The landscape of paddy fields, groves, lagoons and glittering pearls sounds beautiful, but it only slips by, and the speaker barely seems to notice it. What matters is the missed connection. The ending carries the poem's sharpest image: the speaker's body goes one way while his heart rides the other train in the opposite direction. The mood is wistful and tender, and it hints at how easily the people we love can drift past us, even when we are almost within reach.

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