The Flowering Tree — Poem analysis

Balachandran V27.01.2013Contemplative

It is spring; a tree flowers.

You may love it

You may hate it

You may fail to notice it.

Nothing matters to the tree;

To flower in spring

Is in the nature of the tree.

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Seven short lines, no ornament, and yet Balachandran V's "The Flowering Tree" turns a spring blossom into a small lesson in how to live. On the surface it states something almost too obvious to say: in spring, a tree flowers. The surprise comes when the poem swings round to face the reader and says, in effect, that your opinion of the blossom has nothing to do with the blossom. Love it, hate it, or walk past without looking, and the tree carries on. The central idea is that being true to your own nature does not depend on anyone's approval, or even on anyone's attention.

The poem is written in free verse, with no rhyme scheme and no regular metre. The short, plain lines sound like statements of fact. The opening, "It is spring; a tree flowers," is in the simple present tense, and the semicolon joins season and event as if one simply follows from the other. The same punctuation returns in "Nothing matters to the tree;", so the poem is bracketed by two semicolons, each setting up a pause before a conclusion.

Between them comes the poem's one human moment, a triplet built on repetition: "You may love it / You may hate it / You may fail to notice it." The word "may" is generous, since it allows the reader any response. But look at how the list is built. We expect two opposites and then perhaps a middle ground. What we get is love, hate, and then something that is not a feeling at all but an absence. The verb "fail" matters here. It quietly suggests that the person who doesn't notice is missing something, while the tree loses nothing. As the poem is laid out here, each of these lines sits alone with white space around it, which slows the reader down, as though we are being given time to try each reaction on in turn.

Then comes the turn: "Nothing matters to the tree." Read in isolation, this could sound bleak, like a shrug of despair. In context it means something steadier. What doesn't matter to the tree is the judgment of the "you" in the previous lines. Its indifference is not coldness but a kind of freedom, because it has no need of an audience.

The last two lines slow into something close to a proverb: "To flower in spring / Is in the nature of the tree." The word "nature" works in two ways, meaning both the natural world and a thing's essential character. The poem never suggests that the tree chooses to bloom, or strives, or performs. Flowering is simply what it is. There is also a small shift in the articles. The poem begins with "a tree," any tree, and ends with "the tree," as if the particular blossom has grown into a general truth. The word "tree" also ends both the fifth and seventh lines. The poet does not rhyme in the usual way, but the identical word comes back like an echo, and the poem closes on it.

What the poem leaves out is just as telling. There are no colours, no petals, no scent, nothing to tell us whether the blossom is beautiful. Judging by the text, this seems deliberate. To call the flowers lovely would be to join the "you" who loves them, and the poem needs the tree to stay undescribed so that it can stay unjudged. Even the verb is spare. "A tree flowers" turns a noun into an action, so the tree is defined purely by what it does. And because "to flower" also means to flourish, a reader can hear a human meaning in it: to become fully what you are. That is a reading rather than something the poem says outright, but the language leaves room for it.

The poem's significance lies in how much it does with so little. It never lectures or says "you should." It simply sets a human world of opinion beside a natural world of being, and lets the contrast speak. Most of us shape what we do around how it will be received, and the tree is a quiet rebuke to that habit. Some readers may find this comforting, a reminder that worth does not depend on being noticed. Others may find it humbling, since the blossom plainly does not need us. The poem's own phrasing, "You may," allows both responses, and that openness makes it more than a neat observation about spring.

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