Trees and Doves Don’t Wear Clothes — Summary

Balachandran VKottayam, 02/04/2006Cheerful

When was the last time My privates pricked, playfully By the teasing raindrops Splattered by the wind? When was the last time I stood in the rain, nude? As a child? No, mother would have Frisked me away and gave A slap on my bottom too!

Once I stripped on a beach Blushing at my lesser size Than that of the tourist by my side. Played, all dangling, Jumping and rolling, Bewildering unfamiliar freedom. It wasn’t raining then, though.

This summer evening The sky darkened and The wind blew. Treetops swayed, frenzied, And the doves and crows Staggered drunk, in flight. On the high terrace, hidden from eyes I let the wind play with me.

The air-gun shot pellets of rain. Then the gush, the rush and it thundered! The deluge came in sheet after sheet It rained, it rained, it rained! As the drape of raindrops covered me I let my lungi drop away.

Here, in this rain, beneath the sky My friends the trees, dance with me My friends the doves, giggle at me As I stand bereft of clothes My friend the wind, laughs with me.

At nearly fifty, maybe I should know better.

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A man remembers how long it has been since he felt rain on bare skin, and then decides to do something about it. The speaker recalls a childhood where his mother would have scolded him for it, and a beach where he felt shy and self-conscious. Now, on a high terrace where no one can see him, a summer storm gathers, and he lets his lungi fall and stands in the downpour.

The mood moves from wistful and slightly embarrassed to joyful and free. The storm is written with energy: pellets of rain, thunder, sheets of water, and the repeated "it rained, it rained, it rained!" The trees, doves and wind become his friends, dancing, giggling and laughing along with him, so his nakedness feels natural rather than shameful. The closing line, "At nearly fifty, maybe I should know better," is a wry, self-teasing shrug. He admits how silly it might look, but the poem makes clear he isn't sorry.

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