Borderline — Summary

Balachandran V0730hrs 01.11.2015 TrivandrumCheerful

Borderline is a thrilling word Borders between countries Evoking images of the drama at Vagha. Borderline is ominous The borderline between sanity and insanity. Borderline between friendship and intimacy, Bringing into focus And blurring your vision, the line you step out From restrained emotions to riotous expressions of love. To stand on the borderline Is to hold your life in your hands To decide to cross over or not. Borderline is an exciting place to be - Until, with an empty stomach in the morning You are told by the pretty girl - "Your blood sugar level is on the borderline!"

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Balachandran V starts with a word that sounds dramatic and dangerous, then lets a very ordinary moment deflate it. At first, "borderline" is full of excitement: the borders between countries, with the ceremony at Vagha as an image, and then the more unsettling line between sanity and insanity. The speaker also sees it in human relationships, where friendship can slide into intimacy and restrained feelings can turn into "riotous expressions of love." Standing on such a line means holding your life in your hands and choosing whether to cross.

The tone is thoughtful and a little thrilled, even philosophical, until the final lines. Then a pretty girl tells the speaker, on an empty stomach in the morning, that his blood sugar is "on the borderline." The shift is funny and self-mocking. Big ideas about risk and choice shrink to a medical test, and the speaker seems to laugh at himself. The mood ends light, with a hint of real worry underneath.

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