Eruptions of Love — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 03.11.2015Romantic

In the mountains, high up in the grasslands Where mist swirls; where every blade of grass Is wet with dew – Tread softly, for you are trampling upon beads of love.

Love erupts slowly, the moist soil swells – As you watch, it surges, drips Drop by drop. Press your face onto the soil - On your nose, your lips, your tongue Love spreads into your blood.

Love erupts at the tips of your fingers, my love! Caress my face, touch my lips! Run your fingers over my ravaged face Over my ageing skin; perhaps it will glow again At your touch!

Love spurts, my dear, red beads of blood As you tear into me in ecstasy! Love, Love, as you hold me in your arms, Flares fly high; I am blinded by the light!

Love flows only from your fingertips – Touch me when you love – And – before you leave, for ever…

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Balachandran V's poem begins in misty mountain grasslands, where dew-wet grass becomes "beads of love" that we are told to tread on softly. From there, love is pictured as something natural and physical, like soil swelling and releasing drops. It enters the body through the nose, lips and tongue, spreading into the blood.

The poem then turns personal. The speaker, who describes a "ravaged face" and "ageing skin," longs for a lover's fingers to touch him, hoping his skin might glow again. The passion grows more intense, with red beads of blood, flares, and a blinding light, so that love feels both ecstatic and a little violent.

The ending is quieter and more uneasy. Love flows "only from your fingertips," and the speaker begs to be touched before the lover leaves "for ever." The unfinished last line leaves a sense of loss. The mood moves from gentle wonder to fierce desire, then to tender, aching urgency.

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