Fish out of Water — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 29.04.2016Anxious

In this heat, I sweat profuse. I splash water at my armpits The nape of my neck And shameless, over my genitals. On the bed, in the nude I fart and sigh, happy. The dogs lie legs up in the air, Too tired to smell the wind.

I choke at the chilled lemonade Gurgling down my throat. Out in the portico, a crow Dips its beak and then jumps Into the clay pan, splashing in the water.

I wish I were a fish, Swishing my tail, chilling With the mermaids. But then, the fish are dying And the birds and bees too. Soon, we too would, for sure.

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Heat has worn the speaker down, and the poem starts with blunt, almost comic honesty. He sweats, splashes water on his body, lies naked on the bed, farts and sighs. Even the dogs are flat on their backs, too exhausted to sniff the air. The tone is frank and unembarrassed, a kind of happy shamelessness.

Then the poem shifts to small scenes of cooling off. The lemonade is so cold he chokes on it, and a crow hops into a clay pan to splash in the water, enjoying itself just as he would. Human and animal share the same need for relief.

That leads to a daydream: he wishes he were a fish, swishing his tail with mermaids. The mood turns sharply in the last lines. Fish are dying, and so are birds and bees, and he says we will follow. The playful, sleepy heat becomes a quiet warning, and the poem ends on an uneasy note, as if the discomfort of one hot day hints at something larger.

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