Homo sapiens hirsutus — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 07-09-2016Cheerful

Happening to glance at my left forearm the other day, Dark brown skinned and hairy I notice that more hair have turned white. Someday, if I live long enough, My left forearm would turn all white The darkness of my brown skin, but not of my mind, hidden, hopefully.

Looking at the tuft, the bushy growth of hair On my chest ( ah, not on my head!), again white ( why grey?) I wistfully remember how, dark, how black it once were.

I hardly need a mirror these days, having not much On the head to comb and pat them down.

I cling on (and at times nips at) The vestige of my manhood, my moustache Bristling, drooping bicycle handlebars, The beard I dare not grow For fear of incurring my partner’s wrath.

I remember - Hair, growing, dark, In dark and exciting places Darkening shadows Of the emerging adulthood.

Shadows lean, now. They grow oblong, as the Sun approaches dusk. One day, my precious hair, Would be the first to catch fire…

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A man glances at his forearm and notices that the hair there is going white. From that small moment, the speaker reflects on growing old. He looks at his chest hair, which was once black, and jokes about his thinning head, where there is little left to comb. He holds on to his moustache, which he compares to bicycle handlebars, as a last sign of his manhood. The beard he'd like to grow is out of the question, since his partner would object.

The tone is wry and self-mocking, with a quiet sadness underneath. Memories of youth, when hair first appeared in "dark and exciting places," contrast with the present. The image of long, oblong shadows at dusk shows life moving toward its end. The final lines are the starkest: his hair would be the first thing to catch fire, a nod to cremation. The humour softens the poem, but the ending leaves a thoughtful, slightly chilling note about mortality.

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