Looking at the Blue Sky sitting on a Terrace — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum August 2016Contemplative

Where you live, be it By the side of the sea, Or atop a mountain peak- Both, though a fantasy For most of us -

Where you live, be it Cocooned in a cramped Quarters or be it a claustrophobic One bhk - Or like me In an old crumbling Dwelling about to fall apart-

Wherever be that you live Or rot- It would be good To have a window Or a space where you can Look up At the sky.

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Balachandran V's poem is about a small, simple need: wherever you live, you should be able to look up at the sky. The speaker begins by naming the dream homes most people can only imagine, a house by the sea or on a mountaintop. Then he turns to more ordinary places: cramped quarters, a claustrophobic one-bedroom flat, and, in his own case, an old house that is crumbling and close to falling apart.

The tone is plain and a little wry. The speaker doesn't complain loudly, but the word "rot" suggests how worn down life in such a home can feel. Against that, his wish is modest. He doesn't ask for a better house, only "a window" or "a space" to look up from.

The mood is quietly hopeful. The poem suggests that the sky costs nothing and belongs to everyone, so even a poor or broken-down home can offer a little openness and calm. The title, with its terrace and blue sky, supports that reading.

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