Guillotine — Summary

Balachandran V20-10-2008, TrivandrumCheerful

To bite into a chicken’s fried leg

And tear it with a twist of the head

Lick the morsel stuck on the cheek

With the gravy dribbling down the chin…

To light and draw deep on a cigarette

And watch the plume rising

Or the rings reluctantly vanishing

Gazing at the clouds rolling by…

To fondle a glass of whisk y

And listen to the ice clinking

The nip in the air fading

As the cool breeze waltzes by…

To stretch back on the park bench

And ruminate on nothing

Content, still, fulfilled

And admire a young girl passing by…

Then-

Your woman glares –

For the cholesterol is rising

Your doctor preaches –

For Hypertension is bounding

Your friend patronizes –

A prognosis of Cirrhosis

And your mind – please don’t!

Playing tricks of geriatrics…

Why do simple pleasures come

Gilt in guilt?

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The speaker begins by listing ordinary delights: biting into fried chicken, drawing on a cigarette, swirling whisky over ice, and sitting idle on a park bench watching a girl walk past. The images are sensory and unhurried, full of gravy, smoke and the clink of ice. The mood is relaxed, almost lazy, and the speaker seems "content, still, fulfilled."

Then the word "Then-" breaks the spell. Voices crowd in: a woman glaring, a doctor preaching, a friend patronizing. Each one points to a health risk, from cholesterol to hypertension to cirrhosis. The speaker's own mind joins in, imagining old age, and the plea "please don't!" sounds half joking, half anxious. The tone shifts from warm to nagging and uneasy.

The closing question is the heart of it. The title, "Guillotine," suggests a blade hanging over these pleasures. The phrase "Gilt in guilt" plays on sound, suggesting that guilt coats every enjoyment, and the speaker wonders why simple joys must carry such a cost.

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