Cleansing — Summary

Balachandran VKallar, 10.03.2009Inspired

The forest stream grumbles as the big rock Makes it swerve sharply to the right But is relieved that around the bend It can flow freely again. It swirls; over the sand bed the stream made Where I lie in total stupor The stream gurgles happily over the little stones and rocks That cradles me like a foetus in its womb. I lie, floating, watching my toes peeking out of the water And my nose, like a periscope This bloated corpulence slapped Gently by the ripples of the water.

The sun is clouded out for the moment I close my eyes in bliss All I hear are the chuckle of the stream And the chirping of the Wagtail.

It was the time of goodbyes to the past And all the pain is taken away by the stream. I realize I will never again write poems On love and the pain of losing it Because the current has taken all that away As little fish nibble at my heart Cleansing it of pus and blood.

The sun turns up again I turn over, and holding breath Look at the pebbles beneath. Though the water is clear The river bed is blurred I am unable to see But I will, I will I will see it sharply, clearly, one day.

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A man lies in a forest stream and lets the water carry off his grief. The poem opens with the stream itself, grumbling at a rock, then relieved to flow freely again. That small drama quietly mirrors the speaker's own hope of getting past an obstacle. Once he is cradled in the sand and stones, the tone turns warm and playful: his toes poke up, his nose is "like a periscope," and he laughs gently at his own bloated body.

The mood is calm, almost dreamlike, filled with the chuckle of water and a wagtail's chirp. The speaker says it is a time for goodbyes, and he imagines little fish cleaning his heart of "pus and blood," a blunt image of healing. He even says he will no longer write poems about lost love.

The ending is more honest than triumphant. The water is clear, yet the riverbed looks blurred. He cannot yet see his future or his past clearly, but he repeats that one day he will.

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