Her name is Happiness — Poem analysis

Balachandran VTrivandrum, 23.03.2009Dreamy

You never know from where a breeze would waltz in And when. In the sultry heat, When trees bend their heads, looking so forlorn And leaves curl (There is such sorrow in watching them) When street dogs scramble beneath shade And lie panting When clothes in the clothesline hang limp Like mourners of the dead - I - In the centre of the crossroads That extends to barren emptiness all around… I hear the flutter of fallen leaves at my feet And turn to look – The breeze comes up, smoking. It is raining somewhere far away. She comes, enwraps me in her shawl Smothers me with passion. She comes, Bringing me memories of innocence and irrepressible joy. She wears the fragrance of my forgotten youth.

Flickering their tongues Snakes sneak out from their holes, savouring the air.

The rain is coming nearer, nearer, it is almost here - I wait – With great love and tenderness in my heart I wait to see the flowers bloom.

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Happiness is usually something people chase. In Balachandran V's poem it is something that wanders in uninvited, and the poem is about the strange mix of relief and patience that follows. The title gives the answer away, "Her name is Happiness", but the poem never repeats the word. It lets a breeze, a shawl and a smell of rain do the naming. The dateline, Trivandrum, 23 March 2009, is the only context we are given, so the poem has to stand on what it shows us. Judging by the heat and the rain still "far away", it describes the dry stretch before a downpour.

The opening line sets the tone: "You never know from where a breeze would waltz in / And when." The verb "waltz" is the poem's first surprise. A waltz is graceful and a little theatrical, and it makes the breeze sound like a guest who turns up unannounced. The short second line, "And when.", works like a pause, and it enacts the uncertainty it describes.

Then the poem slows down to show what the breeze has to overcome. Three lines in a row begin with "When": trees "bend their heads", dogs "lie panting", clothes "hang limp / Like mourners of the dead". This repetition piles up like the heat itself. The imagery is oddly human. Trees look "forlorn", leaves "curl", and the washing becomes a row of mourners. Even the parenthesis, "(There is such sorrow in watching them)", is quiet and half-hidden, as if the speaker were confessing something. Nature here is not a pretty backdrop. It is tired, and the speaker is tired with it.

The speaker finally appears as a lone "I -", cut off by a dash and standing "In the centre of the crossroads / That extends to barren emptiness all around…". A crossroads suggests a choice, but there is nowhere to go, and the trailing ellipsis lets the emptiness spread across the page. This is the poem's lowest point, and the change comes through sound: "the flutter of fallen leaves at my feet". The soft f-sounds are small and delicate after so much stillness. The breeze arrives "smoking", a startling word that perhaps pictures dust lifting off dry ground. Straight after it comes the news: "It is raining somewhere far away." The breeze is a messenger, carrying the rain's scent before the rain itself.

At this point the breeze becomes "She". She "enwraps me in her shawl" and "smothers me with passion", a verb that hints happiness can be overwhelming, almost too much. She also brings "memories of innocence and irrepressible joy" and "the fragrance of my forgotten youth". The smell of the first rain on dry earth is a plausible source of that fragrance, and it shows how a single sense can open a whole past. Happiness here is not new. It is something recovered.

The snake couplet is the strangest moment. "Flickering their tongues / Snakes sneak out from their holes, savouring the air." The hissing s-sounds give a slight chill, and snakes are not usually symbols of comfort. Yet they, too, are drawn out by the change in the air. The poem seems to admit that when happiness arrives, it wakes everything, including things we might fear, and it does not pretend the world turns purely gentle.

The ending refuses a neat payoff. "The rain is coming nearer, nearer, it is almost here -" speeds up through repetition, then stops on another dash. The speaker simply says, "I wait", and the line is repeated, softened by "great love and tenderness". The flowers have not bloomed yet; the poem closes on "I wait to see the flowers bloom".

That is where its quiet insight lies. The poem treats happiness as anticipation, a breeze that proves rain exists before a drop falls. For students it is also a clear lesson in free verse. With no rhyme and lines of uneven length, the shape of the poem follows the speaker's feelings, shrinking into short gasps and stretching out into longer, easier lines once the breeze comes.

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