Mornings, at Six — Summary

Balachandran VTrivandrum 25.04.2009Romantic

If you had a good night’s sleep, There is nothing welcomer Than the break of the dawn. To lie on bed, watching Eyes half-open, at the darkness Paling, leaves of the Jack And further away the Mango Filtering just enough light So that your eyes do not hurt.

There are always the birds. Sweet tweet of the Robin Sunbirds chirping, peering at flowers Cuckoos always so flustered, Plaintive, like mothers in kitchen Scurrying about in the morning And the omnipresent caws Of the crows – One will love even the crows On such a morning.

Mornings are always so cool. Bitterness of yesterdays, Burdens to carry today Bleakness of the future – For a gentle moment, all pains are gone As curtains flutter in the breeze And the strains of hymns waft in.

I hear the soft taps Of his nails As Tommy comes up And then the door is rudely pushed open As Sancho comes barging in, Ahead of his father. The wet slurps, soft whines And then the nuzzling on the ears - What could be a better way To begin a day?

The telephone rings – My love, to say hello.

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Waking early after a good night's sleep, the speaker lies in bed and takes in the dawn: the darkness slowly paling, the light filtered softly through the leaves of a jackfruit and a mango tree. Birds fill the air, from the sweet robin to the fussing cuckoos, which the speaker compares to flustered mothers in a kitchen. Even the crows, usually noisy and unloved, seem lovable at this hour.

The middle of the poem admits that life has its weight: yesterday's bitterness, today's burdens, a bleak future. But for a moment all of that falls away, helped by fluttering curtains and hymns drifting in on the breeze. Then two dogs, Tommy and Sancho, burst in with slurps, whines and nuzzling, and the speaker asks what could be a better start to the day. A phone call from a loved one closes the poem quietly.

The mood is warm, relaxed and grateful. The plain language and gentle humor make the happiness feel real rather than grand.

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