A sound request — Summary

Friend, there are certain sounds I love at night, like the ongoing opera of the crickets, the one-note sonata of an owl in a nearby tree, or, should I be lying by the lake, the furious but curiously calming encroachment and retreat of the waves, or even the primal, contagious howls of a thousand wild adolescents at Nelson Ledges, shouting all night like lemurs, their brains too stuffed with serotonin to sleep.

But the noises your lover makes with you would not be welcome to my ears were it noon in the middle of summer, let alone midnight, then one-ten, two-thirty, three-fifteen and four. It’s impossible to sleep when her piercing moans nearly perforate my eardrum, so please let me know the next time she will be staying and I’ll gladly run off to Lake Erie for the night, or take my chances with the lemurs at the Ledges.

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The speaker opens like a gentle nature lover, listing the nighttime sounds he enjoys: crickets, an owl, waves on a lakeshore, even a crowd of sleepless teenagers howling at Nelson Ledges. The tone is warm and appreciative, almost like a small hymn to the night.

Then the poem turns. What he can't tolerate are the noises his friend's lover makes, which keep him awake at one-ten, two-thirty, three-fifteen and four. The humor comes from the contrast: after all that praise for loud, wild sounds, he draws the line at this one. The list of times makes his sleeplessness feel painfully real.

The speaker sounds exasperated but good-humored. He stays polite ("Friend," "I'll gladly"), yet the offer to flee to Lake Erie or the "lemurs" is dryly sarcastic. The mood is playful and comic, a politely worded complaint about a very awkward problem.

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