«Blushes…» — Poem analysis

Beshoy EmadRomantic

Blushes, Those which I saw on your cheeks.

Everything about you, Your tangled hair strands, Your messy eyebrows.

The bun-like hair.

In any dictionary, Perfection should be defined as you.

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A blush is over almost as soon as it begins, and Beshoy Emad's untitled poem opens with one. The speaker has seen the color rise in someone's cheeks and kept it, and the rest of the poem is built around that memory. Its central idea is simple but pleasantly contrary: perfection is not smoothness or polish, but the untidy, particular details of a person you love. The poem says nothing about when or why it was written, so everything it offers has to be found in the words themselves.

Look at how the first stanza is put together. Instead of saying "I saw blushes on your cheeks," the poem starts with the bare noun "Blushes," and only afterward explains itself: "Those which I saw on your cheeks." That inverted order feels like memory snagging on its brightest detail before the sentence can catch up. The slightly formal "those which I saw" and the past tense also tell us the moment has already happened. The speaker is looking back. The plural "blushes" could mean one flush across both cheeks or several occasions, and the poem leaves that open.

The second stanza makes a sweeping promise: "Everything about you." The details that follow are surprising. They are "tangled hair strands" and "messy eyebrows," and by ordinary standards these are flaws, the things a person fixes in the mirror before going out. The word "strands" matters too, because it brings the camera in close enough to see single hairs. Only someone who has looked for a long time notices that. The two adjectives, "tangled" and "messy," are the only judgments the poem makes, and they are words usually used as complaints. Here they work as compliments, because they sit inside the phrase "everything about you."

Then comes a stanza of just one line: "The bun-like hair." It has no verb and is hardly even a sentence. It reads like a second glance, a small afterthought that the speaker cannot leave out. The hyphenated "bun-like" is a casual, approximate description, as if the hair were only roughly gathered up. Its isolation on the page works as a pause. The poem slows down to look again at the loosely pinned hair, and the reader slows with it.

All this quiet looking builds toward the closing couplet: "In any dictionary, / Perfection should be defined as you." It is the only place where the poem makes a full grammatical claim, and it is a bold one. The phrase "any dictionary" is a deliberate exaggeration, appealing to the most official, impersonal kind of book there is. The modal "should be" matters as well. The speaker doesn't say the dictionary says this. He says it ought to, which quietly suggests that the existing definitions are wrong or at least incomplete. There is also a neat effect in the form. A dictionary entry gives a headword and then examples, and the poem has just done that, offering the blush, the hair and the eyebrows as the evidence for its definition.

The poem has no rhyme and no regular meter. Its short, conversational lines are closer to speech than to song. The one echo is the repeated line ending "you," in "about you" and "as you," which pulls the middle of the poem toward its last word. The pronouns are telling as well. "You" and "your" fill the poem, while "I" appears only once, in "I saw." The speaker is almost invisible, a witness rather than a subject, and the person he describes takes up nearly all the space.

The poem matters because of how little it needs. Many love poems praise flawless features, but this one finds its praise in disorder and so redefines perfection as something specific and human rather than an ideal. It also suggests that adoration is a way of seeing, since the same tangled hair that might look careless to a stranger becomes, to the speaker, the very thing a dictionary should describe.

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