Soon Enough — Poem analysis

Bob3-31-16Anxious

Soon enough I'll find them Soon enough they'll stray Then I'll find ropes to bind them And lock them all away Soon enough they'll leave me Like they always do Soon enough I'll cry Alone, under the moon

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Almost nothing in Bob's "Soon Enough" has happened yet. Every verb points forward: *I'll find*, *they'll stray*, *I'll cry*. The single exception is a quiet present-tense admission, "Like they always do." The poem's central idea sits in the gap between those two ways of speaking. The speaker imagines a future in which he controls the people around him, but the one fact he is sure of is that they leave. Possessiveness here is really fear of abandonment, dressed up as a threat.

The title phrase does a lot of the work. "Soon enough" is an idiom we usually hear as a warning ("you'll learn soon enough") or as consolation. Bob repeats it four times, so that it opens half the lines and beats like a drum. Its meaning also shifts as it goes. In the first stanza it sounds eager and menacing, the voice of someone who relishes what's coming. By the second stanza, "Soon enough they'll leave me" and "Soon enough I'll cry" make it sound like resignation, even dread. The same words carry both moods, and the change from one to the other is the poem's real movement.

The first four lines are built from harsh, practical verbs: *find*, *bind*, *lock*. The ropes are the poem's only concrete object, and the speaker doesn't just hope to locate them, he plans to "find ropes," as though the search were already part of the ritual. The word "them" is never explained. It could be friends, lovers, family, or something more abstract, and the poem is more unsettling for refusing to say. The rhyme scheme tightens the effect. "Them" ends both the first and third lines, an identical rhyme that feels almost like a lock clicking shut, and "stray" and "away" rhyme neatly in between. Inside the third line, "find" and "bind" chime too, linking searching with imprisoning. With short lines of about three beats each, the stanza has the bounce of a nursery rhyme, and that cheerful music makes the content colder.

Then the pattern loosens. In the second stanza, "me" and "cry" don't rhyme with anything, and only "do" and "moon" share a vowel sound, so the neat scheme of the first half frays. Judging by this shift, the poem's form seems to follow the speaker's loss of control: the tidy, confident music of the first stanza can't survive the thought of being left. The verbs change as well, from active and aggressive (*bind*, *lock*) to helpless (*leave*, *cry*). "Cry" is the only word in the poem that names a feeling, and it arrives right at the end.

The last line slows everything down. "Alone, under the moon" is set off by a comma, so "alone" gets its own beat before the image widens out. The moon is a traditional companion of nighttime loneliness. It is distant, cold, and a silent witness, and it makes the speaker look very small. Nobody answers him from under it, and the poem does not pretend anyone will.

What makes the poem worth reading closely is the contradiction it leaves unspoken. If the speaker really did tie and lock his "them" away, they would not be able to leave, yet the poem still ends with him crying alone. The ropes solve nothing, and the fantasy of control collapses into the same emptiness it was meant to prevent. It is also possible to read the poem as a self-fulfilling prophecy, in which the urge to bind people is exactly what drives them away. The poem never states this, but its structure invites it, since the threat comes first and the loneliness follows.

We have no information about Bob beyond the name and the date given with the poem, so it is safest to treat the speaker as a voice rather than a confession. As a voice, he is compact and chilling, and he is also sad. In just eight lines, Bob shows how fear can sound like menace, and how a sing-song rhythm can carry something quite dark.

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