Haiku 13 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

What is this concrete, such gravel, steel, that rebar against the dead stars?

Small plane overhead and a worn van’s chittering usher out the sun

Empty ice-cream pint in this, I’ve cultivated exactly one ant.

Atop dinosaurs we prance; who can say what, shall caper over us?

Just gone to purple the upper sky through my blinds pale blue over West.

I begin putting it all together; almost done, at the green light.

Canned soul singer, Dixieland street trumpet, join downtown midair

Terry Hall’s windows how much they’ve seen; do they catch that tear of the wrecker?

Decades of students… now nothing sits inside save the grinding machines

Daylight Savings, spring I’m late to the library on time for the sun.

On a bench with this guitar; awaiting rebuke… only the softball field

“Softball’s silly”–and he stole my lover, so he must know everything.

Two-hour wait for the top of the queue, wrestling Quetzalcoatl

The truck, downshifting thick chuffle of the air brakes a pause in the wind

Five ones, he wants and will he haunt downstairs ever after, for them?

The sun dries out my drowned world, warms my toes; I’ll leave dishes, to insects.

My brother’s birthday a Portuguese singer soothes pricked anxiety

The cherry blossoms! I pity He who grows bored of them–wait, is that…?

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Think of this as a string of tiny snapshots from one person's wandering days in a city. Each stanza catches something passing: a small plane, a worn van, a street trumpet, a truck's air brakes, a softball field, a Portuguese singer on the speakers. The speaker notices sky colors, sunlight on bare toes, and an ant living in an empty ice-cream pint, and the tone is wry rather than solemn.

Underneath the observation, there's a mix of feelings. Concrete and rebar are set against "the dead stars," and we prance "atop dinosaurs," so the speaker keeps sensing how much time lies beneath and above ordinary life. A demolished building, once full of students, now holds only machines, which brings a quiet sadness. Other moments are bitter or funny, like the line about the man who "stole my lover." The ending turns lighter: cherry blossoms, a joke about being bored of them, and a sudden interruption. The overall mood is relaxed, a little lonely, and alert to small wonders.

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