Haiku 15 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

The ambulance man he sees me, my northbound bus, then runs to the west.

Gasoline can, spilled then righted, five yards away sunny-hot pavement.

Yes, Lloyd Building, Yes, Int’nl Teriyaki, Stay, feeble sunshine!

Five pigeons, rooftop one does a dance while the rest perch, vigilant.

Does anybody think, of this old bench, and its conversation husks?

“I can’t stand the rain”– or, for today’s purposes the gaps in the rain

The engine surges as it drives the pavement saw 9 am Saturday

Spider, seventh floor spun its web in a recess what makes its dinner?

A hard grind ahead but I’m lying on my back grateful for no rain.

Waterspout, column a leak from the overpass white gold from the sun

The washerwoman’s cry in her sleep: “She flies!” …her sole indulgence

“Where are you going?” He just makes a fishy face and doesn’t answer

One horrible week the library’s north window it’s Sunday again.

Piebald fireplug flaking yellow over over green shorter than the weeds.

I punched myself in the head, last week, both sides still tender, still sore.

The boy waits his turn, with a smaller boy, plastic one wears a red cap.

In the heat I smell the man knitting a green hat has not washed today.

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Andrew Hamlin's "Haiku 15" is a string of brief snapshots, each one caught in passing. A man runs for an ambulance, a gasoline can is knocked over and set upright, pigeons perch on a rooftop, a spider's web hangs in a recess on the seventh floor. Signs like "Lloyd Building" and "Int'l Teriyaki" suggest a busy urban street, and the weather keeps returning: the speaker is grateful for the gaps in the rain, for "feeble sunshine," and for lying down without being soaked.

The speaker mostly watches and wonders, asking who thinks about an old bench or what feeds a spider. The tone is wry and easygoing, even when the details turn odd or rough, like the self-inflicted punch to the head or the knitter who hasn't washed. The mood is quiet attention. Nothing is resolved, and nothing needs to be. The poem suggests that small, overlooked things, and small pleasures like dry weather, are worth noticing.

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