Haiku 49 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

By the prison gate

lone brown napkin somersaults

forward in the breeze

Man in the wheelchair

needs his umbrella back...

sweat bulbs in my sleeves

Twilight-tinged window

scent of cooking liver

three hours to Sunday

"O, no one loves me!"

a game for my mind

woolly countless eons

One shoe, a tin cup

spoiled celery for breakfast

shadow of the church

Madman screams again

my toweled hands jump

to my dropped jaw

Too hot for birdsong

yet the rascals found my ledge

for their warm chorus!

Moments of silence

if you added them all up

no noise evermore

"A book," she snaps

about the tome at her nose

and that's all I get

Ineffable moon!

I'll dub thee more adjectives

'til the morning bus

I spare a spider

but grant no extra help, at

the strawberry patch

"I could wither you"

whispers the ghost from the elm

as twilight spreads

Twinned gliding goshawks

Which one follows the other?

Southward past the sun

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Andrew Hamlin's "Haiku 49" is a string of short, three-line snapshots, each catching a moment of everyday life with a slightly off-kilter eye. A napkin tumbles by a prison gate. A man in a wheelchair wants his umbrella back. Someone smells liver cooking and counts the hours until Sunday. Nothing is explained, and the scenes sit side by side like a handful of odd photographs.

The speaker comes across as lonely, restless, and quietly funny. He plays a mind game of self-pity ("O, no one loves me!"), decides to pile adjectives onto the moon, and spares a spider but won't help it any further. A sudden scream makes his jaw drop, and a curt "A book" is all he gets from a woman.

The mood shifts between wry humor and a low unease. Ghostly whispers, empty silence, and twilight keep returning. The final image of two goshawks gliding south leaves a note of open, unanswered wonder.

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