Haiku 52 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

March, forgiven sins at last… a roast beef sandwich

At my death… will even the wasted time comfort me?

He speaks to me in the dreams I don’t have until summer

The Air Force man holds a sapling, two feet from the root ball

Thick thud, the cooper’s mallet– so much sleet!

March… big fish in small bowl eyes the thunderstorm

Where do you call home? queries bluebird from her upraised branch

March… drums like a dropped tire iron– gravel crunch

Late March… thunderclaps, quite like a shoving match

Late March… drowsy train driver thinks in long words

Late March: wind on my shaved neck… stalled bus

March… The harlequin eludes me south past the bank

The madwoman… will she cross the street? (She gets on my bus)

She won’t be vaccinated… all I can do is watch the birds

The sultan in his palace if he strains a bit hears the cricket

March… the raven strains its neck for half an apple

March… effervescence of the dew and a jackhammer

Angel whispers… the night breeze, sweeping up leaves

March… cargo barge off downtown dwarfs the ferry

And one day, masks stacked cupboard… thick dust

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Andrew Hamlin's sequence reads like a notebook kept through March, mostly from the seat of a bus. Each tiny poem catches one passing moment: a raven straining for half an apple, a fish watching a storm from its bowl, a ferry dwarfed by a cargo barge, a jackhammer cutting into morning dew. Ordinary scenes sit beside odd, funny ones, and the speaker seems content simply to notice.

Under the humor, quieter worries surface. One poem wonders whether even "wasted time" will comfort the speaker at death. Another mentions someone who won't be vaccinated, and the last imagines masks stacked in a cupboard under thick dust. These details suggest a time of illness and caution, though the poems never say so outright. The closing image hints that the fear will fade into something forgotten.

The mood is wry, watchful, and gently melancholy. The speaker doesn't solve anything; he pays attention, and the attention itself becomes a kind of comfort.

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