Haiku 8 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

This particular shifting of the rain, I am just in time for it.

Lemon-drop lamp and its wavering life reflected in the chai.

Scrawlings, backwards, in the glass, in the sun, downtown escalator

Red clouds catching sun, the hole at Sixth Avenue dark in minutes.

“Red cells save lives” reads the bus for the blood drive– black letters on white.

It’s happened again masses off the streets, leaving the mad you’ll notice I’m still here.

Every now and then the teriyaki restaurant has room to sit down

She looks so much like the other one, long ago flowers in her hand.

Characteristics of everything, change in winter a loss of flavor

Christmas Eve, singing, oh, but it’s only one man one fragile strange tune.

“BC Entities” a synthetic urine kit… who left just the box?

This building, this sun, I break into a huge grin and don’t even care.

“I know it’s wrong”– feeding doughnuts to the gulls– “But I’ve been hungry, too.”

A twitchy crow pokes at the glass overhang winter’s here again.

She will stay with him “As long as he gives me mine,” her Disneyland jacket.

Civilization, so lovely, at least, as that one flute in the hall.

“Nobody loves me”– no, actually, it’s just morning and breathing.

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Think of this sequence as a walk through a city in cold, wet weather, where the speaker stops to notice whatever passes: a lamp reflected in a cup of chai, a bus advertising a blood drive, a man feeding doughnuts to gulls, a crow poking at a glass overhang. The setting looks like an urban downtown, though the poem only hints at it through details like Sixth Avenue and the escalator.

The speaker is a quiet observer, often a bit lonely, and sometimes funny about it. "You'll notice I'm still here" and "has room to sit down" carry a dry humor, while the memory of a woman with flowers shows a flicker of longing. Yet the mood isn't bleak. Moments of grinning for no reason, or admiring a single flute in a hall, suggest that small beauty is enough. The last poem pulls it together: feeling unloved turns out to be just morning and breathing, a gentle, wry reset.

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