Haiku 10 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

Out of this nightfall two white trucks nose-to-nose, or were they always there?

Two young women kiss and just so, the storm passes… the laughter and glass.

All my life I dreamed of glory but I don’t know it sitting awake.

Raindrops fill a pond in the parking lot, size of a lake, to an ant.

The edge of the storm black, moving fast to the north, sunlight past the hill.

Ice cream, 2 am recalling how for one pint I felt immortal.

The wind in the storm just for a moment, so like a small boy’s whistle

A thing sublime, this all that can be done, is to await its return.

Homeward in the dark she remembers a good friend not seen for decades.

Curiosity leaves some of us still standing and I miss the rest.

Tiny birds, blossoms, the gardeners–how little I know of it all!

It doesn’t last, but for a few seconds I float above my raging.

Bright gleaming innards of the transparent disc case lit by the sunset.

Ticking baseboard heat awful day, today, and that’s one thing we got right.

Again I tell them God does not exist; again I get what’s coming.

Our team wins the game cars honk passing north and south the sun waits to rise.

These two enemies, I leave them at the table to share growing old.

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Andrew Hamlin's "Haiku 10" is really a string of sixteen short poems, each catching a single moment: two white trucks appearing out of the dark, raindrops filling a parking-lot pond that looks like a lake to an ant, ice cream at 2 am. Storms drift in and out, and so do memories, laughter, and small bursts of feeling.

The speaker moves between wonder and rueful honesty. He admits how little he knows ("how little I know of it all!"), how fleeting calm is, and how an old dream of glory doesn't fit with sitting awake at night. There's humor too, as in the line about telling people God doesn't exist and getting "what's coming." Yet the final haiku, where two enemies are left at a table to "share growing old," feels gentle, even forgiving.

The mood is quiet, nocturnal, and a little wry. Nothing big happens, but the poem suggests that paying attention to ordinary scraps of life is where meaning, and some peace, might be found.

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