In Stir — Summary

Art GomezAnxious

The man squirms at the fringe of the Farmer’s Market, claims his cranny, and wild smiles a grimace.

His quarrels turn to spittle across the sidewalk. Viscous, thick as lubricant, his words drool from the corners of his downturned mouth onto the front of his threadbare shirt.

Leaning forward he defies gravity, hovering face-down as if feet are locked in concrete. Jerking violently, he straightens then slides down the side of the building that guards his back until he sits in quasi-lotus.

“Tourniquet” he mumbles.

Just that one word escapes as he pulls a grimy bag with a smiley face over his head.

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Art Gomez's "In Stir" watches a man on the edge of a Farmer's Market who seems to be in the grip of addiction or some kind of crisis. The speaker doesn't tell us this outright; the poem simply describes what is seen. The man squirms, mutters, drools onto his threadbare shirt, leans forward at an impossible angle, then jerks upright and slumps against a wall. The word "tourniquet," the only thing he says, hints at drugs, though the poem leaves that as a suggestion.

The speaker stays an observer, and the tone is cold and clinical, close to a camera. The sharp, physical details (spittle, "viscous, thick as lubricant") make us uncomfortable, and it's hard to look away. The ending is the most striking part. The man pulls a bag with a smiley face over his head, hiding himself behind a cheerful picture. The mood is bleak and uneasy, with a quiet sadness about how a person can be seen and ignored at once. The title's pun on "stir" adds to this: he is stirred up, and perhaps trapped.

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